tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-95918735056740999.post8863097523524418725..comments2009-11-26T00:36:36.346-08:00Comments on The Esoteric War: Chapter ThreeBhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00246242435558094405noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-95918735056740999.post-7074943493807320922009-11-26T00:36:36.346-08:002009-11-26T00:36:36.346-08:00I actually preferred the first-person narrative - ...I actually preferred the first-person narrative - I came here via /x/, the Stranger and Tulpa stories, and like those, I feel the first-person telling gave the story a more visceral, realistic vibe. Basically, the world you're creating felt altogether more real when it was coming as stream-of-consciousness from an inhabitant than it does coming from a narrator.<br /><br />I can see where it would cause a problem insofar as events that happen when Luke isn't around, though.<br /><br />I do hope you're still writing this. I love your work.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com